youngblood

an experiment
in prosepoetry

 
 
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you

are

not

a

real

critic

 
 
 
 

youre not its simple you cant judge yourself or your work harsh enough.

 
 

could anybody?
probably not.

 
 

you need feedback insights feed progress thats good that helps otherwise you get stuck in a loop a tidepool of maybe or maybe not

 
 

seek feedback.
ask more.
look for the real critics,
they're out there.

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friends

2015—2020

keep writing   
there is wisdom
in sight 

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